Monday, May 2, 2016
I went over the first draft last night and fixed some mistakes, misspellings and beefed up some descriptions. I ended up with more than 300 more words than I had when I started.
Now I have thought of a scene I want to add and another one I think I need to rewrite! You can't be using powers before you have them. Even in fiction that isn't right.
Also, I think maybe I will start writing the follow-up novel as soon as I am done with the first draft of Second Front. I think they are different enough that I won't confuse myself writing a little of two stories on different days.
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